Tuesday, February 27, 2007
this is where I stand is my first effort at composition,tho its not my best effort,it’s a first and i gues it’s a good start anyhows! hahaha. it was penned right around midnight,and just after the first verse I found it simply impossible to look back…it carried such great meaning and intensity for me because it reflects a cry within my being for respite,it tells of a longing, in pain and desperation from all the disappointments that come with this life here on earth,to run back to the father’s embrace and to hold his hand again.it tells of a longing within every one of us to find someone,someone out there that will see us for who we really are,it tells of a cry of lonliness, and through it all when we come back into his presence,we realise he’s got so much to tell...
this has been coming for a really looooong time! ive struggled day after day to come up with something, but nothing ever did come to completion,cause none of the things id write really ever meant something personal to me. they’d appear to be without spirit,and so id abandon them halfway through. this is where I stand reflects something going beyond what you usually see on the surface. It lays out my deeper desires and longings.
there you go,my first piece.
the melody’s coming toget… that being said,there are a whole lota things I still need to work on… it could take me up to about a week or so… do throw in constructive comments... (:
love.
STORMcity!;
- 5:22 AM